Merlot Wine Reviews

July 5, 2010
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merlot wine reviews
A poem rushed… a poem rushed… for review… for review, if one wishes, wishes? C/C?

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Wine Ellipsis

I taste a wine, sweet nectar it-
syrah, syrah, syrah indeed.
A pungent nose, such earthiness
as if the soil wished your love.
Syrah, syrah…syrah indeed.

And then I sip a fine merlot-
a cabernet, a spicy grenache
and indecided I become, I become
and inebriated too, inebriated too
Oh, did I just say that, must be the wine,
must be the wine. Gotta love tastings.
Gotta love… wine….

I’m not entirely sure what your asking, but I’ll give my opinion comments and advise. I like it, (much better than the last one i read). I don’t know if it’s meant to be funny but i chuckled. It’s well written and there’s much depth in it. I love how you took the path alcohol has, funny, innocent, and getting a little drunk. I’d like to see a bit more of the poem, if you wouldn’t mind writing more, but keep in mind more isn’t always better. If you do plan to write more compare and contrast the before and after. Other than that It’s beautifully written.

As it is, it’s wonderful.

Wine Review: Merlot Wine Flight with Itza (La Garto, Adastra, Fernwood Cellars)

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